Loved it, everything is on point! Yes it looks like Adventure Time but I really don't see a problem with that. Looking forward to see more!
Perfect, just perfect. I'm not a big fan of Undertale but this really deserves respect, even from someone who doesn't know nothing about the game. Looks like something you would see in a real anime, great work!
*Tries to make a living as an artist*
*Ended up killing myself because of depression*
Very accurate life simulator, 5/5.
Hey, don't mind these poor reviews, I think this game is fucking hilarious(and chalenging too)!
Really cool, I like the synths at 1:39. Yeah it could use some variation, but it's not "terrible" as you tagged.
I dig the aesthetic, I have a soft spot for distorted synths, you know hahaha. The chill breakdown at 1:30 is on point.
However I think you should pay more attention on your overall mixing. Some sounds (like the white noise) is too loud, while some other stuff like the drums have a heavy panning to the right channel. Also the drum section starting at 0:38 have too much reverb in my opinion.
I like the track, it have potential. It just needs some more atention here and there.
I like the kick and the synths you chose, also adding reverb was a good idea. It could use more variation tho, the track has plenty more space for experiments, it is kinda blank at some points. But overal its ok.
If I had a rock band I would use this in my debut album cover.
It's pretty cool man, love the color patette. You should give it a background!
Thanks a lot!
Since you're on that realistic vibe, it would be nice to keep an eye on certain details, like highlights and values (the colors are distiguishable, but they appear to have a close 'light intensity'). Would also be nice to make the background a bit lighter to make the dark armor stand out more.
Speaking about armors, the design looks a bit pointy. It think it would feel a bit uncomfortable for a woman around the side of her breasts. I hope I'm not nitpicking, but remember when it comes to realism, the key for making something convincing is to think about the actual use of it (hope it didn't sound very complicated/weird).
You're on the right track, just try to pay more attention to details and your work will become much better. Good luck!
That's great advice thank you! I try to improve with each one. The requester wanted me to go with dark armour and stormy sky. But I do understand about putting in function as well as form. Getting there hopefully! Highlights and shade still scare me, but I'm getting braver with each painting I hope
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